Joseph Potvin wrote:

I worked on this round of edits outside of GitLab
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19Ih-Z74Ps4sIA2s_MW349VA3QwereOTMxRCPH12bdYE/edit?usp=sharing
...because I needed to have visible to me what I was deleting while adding segments in order to focus my mind 'uninterrupted'.
The syntax remain, so I expect the result should work to drop back into GitLab, to show the diffs correctly.

My suggested accompanying graphic is attached to this issue.

Deja: Hi - I made edits to this and updated the doc. Thank you for your patience.

Deja,
I finally worked through the blog entry on the “Bézier Spline” used for the ER Index. I did this through the version on GitLab:
https://gitlab.com/xalgorithms-alliance/community-opperations/xf-website-v3/-/merge_requests/45/diffs
(I assumed that was the version to work from, not the GoogleDocs one. Was I correct to use that one?)

One thing I didn't change, is that first part of the blog entry feels very much "in your voice" but the second half is too purely descriptive. I suggest you add some personal reflections to the second half -- not much. Just enough to break up the description+description+description+description style it has presently.